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November 30, 2012
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=FriedCrayon Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Project comment,
First off the anatomy isn't that bad but not alot of people get it right so don't get discourage the human form in not an easy subject. The only things that I would work on is if she is laying on the floor then i would do straight lines unless that was intentional for some kind of meaning but it does give it a feeling of cradling, and the last thing is the hair if she was laying down and her hair stretched out then it would be level to the bottom of her head clumped altogether or spread out(which ever you prefer) but on the same level as the rest of her body laying on the ground. nice work and Keep it up.
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*nyura-vanko Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thankyou and yes the hair was a big issue haha i suck at drawing hair
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:iconfriedcrayon:
Mood: Affection =FriedCrayon Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well just keep trying we all have our week spots. You will get it just like they always say practice practice practice. sounds repetitious I know but it works :)
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*nyura-vanko Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ahahaha thanks will do :P
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Mood: Wow! ~gjergji11 Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome work dude
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*nyura-vanko Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thankyou! :happybounce:
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~OuroborosRagnarok Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it looks better inked.
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*nyura-vanko Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really? whys that? :)
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~OuroborosRagnarok Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
not sure. I think it's because you got to revise it a little, and make subtle changes?
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*nyura-vanko Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i guess? i didnt really change anything XD
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